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Friday, September 8, 2017

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                          Features

1.  Written  in present tense.
2. Rich strong persuasive language e.g I believe, I strongly believe ,In my opinion.
3. Separate your ideas into different paragraphs.
4. Add detail to your  ideas.
5. Include an introduction, body and conclusion.
6. You can write for something or against something.         Example of an Introduction.



I strongly believe that we should be allowed to chew gew at school.I will provide you with many reasons as to why we should be allowed to chew gum.

At school teachers use glue tack.  It costs lots of money.The teachers can use gum to save money.The teachers can buy schools books with the money.

If you have bad breath you should chew gum in the morning so your friends will not run away from you. You might not  have any friends to play with at morning tea or lunch time. It is a sensible idea to carry  gum around with you.

    Chewing gum helps when you have acid reflux because when you chew gum the acid stays down. If the acid does not stay down you will feel sick.

I hope that I have provided you with many reasons as to why we should be allowed to chew gum at school.

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