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Friday, September 22, 2017

The day there was a killer

I walked home from softball practice and  when I got home no one was there,I shouted out to mum and dad, but there was no answer. I soon realized that the street was quiet  and seemed abandoned I got the spare key out from under the the mat and opened the door. I could see blood drops on the carpet, I grabbed the softball  bat out of my duffle bag just incase,{I Was  rather scared} I slowly followed the blood trail into mums room.As i got closer to her room the blood got thicker,the carpet was soaked  and my shoes were stained with blood.I was so scared and confused.I thought about mum, rushing into her room I saw that window was smashed open and that's where the blooded stared.I looked out into the back yard and there was a strangers dead body on my barbeque.I reached to get my phone out of my pocket to call mum or the poiles..Anyone that can help me.As I picked up the phone it started ringing,with a fright I answered the call.The man was deep breathing and whispered in a awuf old man's voice” Look behind you!!”.I freaked out dropping the phone.I Turned around slowly with my bat to defend me.The killer was standing in the doorway blocking my exit. He was taller than my Uncle, he had a hood over his head, he was wearing a black leather coat,clothes were soaking in blood, In his hand a new shiny machete.

I turned towed through the broken window,without even thinking I jumped out and  cutting  my arm along the way.I run toward the poiles stione hoping to get to safety ,I could hear his loud footsteps chasing me. The steer  were Abandoned No one could help me. I decided I'm the only one that can Save myself, I needed a Weapon,  thinking fast I ran to get a gun from the   local hunting and fishing shop, the guns were locked away but I could get my hands on the happily that was on display.

The killer was  chasing me still, I can see him searching the streets for me he's slower that I am. I amy myself  with  the bat. I was happily has getting closer but  I was  really scared  .I jump up and throw the spare toward him,stad him in the back,he fell to the ground shouting out in pain!!!

I take out the spare  out of his back,kick his body over and I  realize, oh on I know this person the killer is my science teacher Mr Wallace. I got his phone out of the back pocket  and called the police station. As  the phone was ringing  I woke up from a my dream … OH on it was just a dream, today is Monday and we  have our science test today.


Friday, September 8, 2017

Features


                          Features

1.  Written  in present tense.
2. Rich strong persuasive language e.g I believe, I strongly believe ,In my opinion.
3. Separate your ideas into different paragraphs.
4. Add detail to your  ideas.
5. Include an introduction, body and conclusion.
6. You can write for something or against something.         Example of an Introduction.



I strongly believe that we should be allowed to chew gew at school.I will provide you with many reasons as to why we should be allowed to chew gum.

At school teachers use glue tack.  It costs lots of money.The teachers can use gum to save money.The teachers can buy schools books with the money.

If you have bad breath you should chew gum in the morning so your friends will not run away from you. You might not  have any friends to play with at morning tea or lunch time. It is a sensible idea to carry  gum around with you.

    Chewing gum helps when you have acid reflux because when you chew gum the acid stays down. If the acid does not stay down you will feel sick.

I hope that I have provided you with many reasons as to why we should be allowed to chew gum at school.